So I have decided to post some of my writings online... poetry, short stories, etc. I decided to do it here to get some HONEST feedback. Positive comments and any criticism is accepted, but if you call me any kind of negative names because of this, your comment will be deleted. You know who you are....
Envy
I have what you wanted
I won in the end
if this is what it feels like
to hold the ace
from where does this jealous
this little green man
visit from time to time
in the depth of my chest
I should be the winner
I should be the best
And that's the first of a few I have right now. I know what everyone is thinking - Dub, you can't write, you can barely read. Well, my friends, it's time you knew something about me - I am actually pretty intelligent when I want to show it. So there, nyah, nyah, nyah (and yes, I know what irony means).
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